Pandavas Leave This World (Indian Epics: Images and PDE Epics)
The Ties that Bind
Vayu, the Wind God, left his breezy path and returned to heaven. He sought out Dharma, the Lord of Death and Justice. Upon reaching his chambers, Vayu asked for
Dharma for his counsel. The reason was a
delicate matter that is best left between family members.
“Dharma, we should discuss the trials that face our son’s. I have observed their choices, and I fear
they are on a dark path. My son Bhima,
has become crueler during their exile.
He cares not about the destruction of flora and fauna. While your son Yudhishthira,
caused their banishment by having no self-control, and did not stop gambling
when he should,” said Vayu.
The words caused Dharma to pause and reflect. He too had grown concerned over the choices
that the Pandava brothers have made in recent weeks. Eventually he turned to
Vayu with a furrowed brow.
“I to share your concerns Vayu. However, you know we are forbidden to
interfere,” said Dharma.
“We must do something!
They are our children. Surely,
there must be something we can do?” said Vayu.
After a few moments, Dharma said, “How about a compromise. We help guide them but not directly. They would never know it was us. We would just nudge them along the proper
course.”
So, the two Gods parted ways and started to devise plans to
help their children in a time of need.
They both knew that the exile was hard on the sons because their
mother Kunti did not accompany them. Even
though they are grown men, there are times when they still need their parents’
help.
Vayu rode the wind currents back to earth. He sought his oldest son Hanuman. Vayu had nothing but the greatest love for
Hanuman. As luck would have it Hanuman
was wondering through the same woods that Bhima lived during his time of
exile.
“My son! Please help
your half-brother. He is so much younger
than you and could use your guidance. I
would talk to him myself if I could, but such a thing is not possible. I fear he treads a dark path, and it is a
fate that I wish to spare him from,” said Vayu.
“Of course, father,” said Hanuman, “I have seen the destruction
he has caused. He kills tigers and
elephants with no remorse. I will speak
to him about the four Yuga. Also, I will
remind him of the four castes and what is expected of each. Perhaps this will make him consider others
and lessen his pride. After all, Bhima
is my brother, and I do not wish to see him fail because of his arrogance.”
“Thank you my most beloved son. I knew I could count on you,” said Vayu.
“Ha-Ha! Think nothing of it! What is family for?” said
Hanuman.
With a great weight lifted off his shoulders, Vayu returned
to heaven. He wanted to speak with Dharma. First, he wanted to
inform Dharma, about the progress he had made with Bhima. Second, he was curious about how Dharma
fared with Yudhishthira. He was greatly surprised to find out that
Dharma would not return to heaven for quite some time.
For years now, Dharma had concealed
himself in the form of a hound.
Yudhishthira, loved the hound. He
was Yudhishthira’s best friend and loyal companion. Eventually, Dharma realized that Yudhishthira
needed a reminder to be humble. So, he
asked his friend the mongoose to tell the story of the Brahman and his
family. The mongoose recounted the tale
after Yudhishthira’s great horse sacrifice.
Dharma was pleased that it had the desired humbling effect on
Yudhishthira. Content, Dharma decided to
remain as a hound until the Pandava family returned to heaven. He could not bring himself to abandon his son
when he would need his father the most. After
all, they were family.
Author’s Note
This story was based on the PDE
version of The Mahabharata. I found it interesting how the family
connections of the Pandava family were so complex. So, this story focused on the two Gods and
their sons. The Mahabharata only briefly mentioned the fathers. I chose to take a lot of liberties with this
story. I found it hard to believe that
the fathers would not take an active interest in their sons’ grand
adventure. I took snippets of the four
stories and created a back story where the fathers caused the events in The Mahabharata to occur. The original stories can be read by following
the links in the sources section.
Sources
Bhima and Hanuman, The Mahabharata, A Summary, John Mandeville Macfie.
The Mongoose, The Story of The Great War, Annie Besant.
The Pandavas Depart, Indian Myth and Legend, Donald A. Mackenzie.
The Sons of Pandu, Indian Myth and Legend, Donald A. Mackenzie.
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Hey Ramona! I first wanted to say that I really like your blog background, it's so pretty! Secondly, I really enjoyed reading your story. The use of dialogue was great and was full of emotions that the characters were feeling!
ReplyDeleteSo did the Pandavas ever make it into heaven? I like that you left off without really going into further detail because I fee like they did.. but if they didn't then that is a great transition for another story!
Hi Ramona! I love the creativity of this story! I like that you connected 4 different stories to create this story! Your writing is very descriptive and clear. You can tell that a lot of attention to detail and thought went into your writing. Keep up the good work this semester and good luck with the rest of the class!
ReplyDeleteHi Ramona! I really liked this fatherly side to the Gods that you created. It was very heart-warming and I liked their personalities coincided with the ways that they reached out to their sons. It is so awesome that you used several stories to weave together your own, and that you did it so well. You really made a clear story that wasn't confusing and I could clearly understand the logical progression of the characters. I wasn't confused by anyone's actions because your characterization had made it clear that this was in line with who they are. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the humanizing aspect of the gods playing good parental figures (it happens too often in mythology that being good parents is the last thing on their celestial to-do list). I found it sweet that Dharma would stay with his son in the form of a loyal companion, and I really appreciated the extra context this story gave Hanuman’s cameo appearance. Nice work!